feedback

I've spoken to some of you about your coursework, which on the whole has been done very well. A few tweaks needed though.

The evaluation questions must be done on a powerpoint and embedded. Publish it on Slideshare.net and then embed to your blog
Eva- good - get the evaluation changed and add some more ideas about film opening conventions and planning
Adam- some more research into film openings and genre. More specific points about skills developed since the prelim.
Max H- I spoke to you re what else you can do.
Keefer - good. I can't see the evaluation.
Paul- evaluation too vague. Follow the points for each question in more detail. Question 7 very weak at mo.
Cally- evaluation as a powerpoint. more evidence of research into the conventions of film openings
Max Tonk- good but q.7 of evaluation weak. target audience? Questionnaires etc?

Jack- some good work, but the evaluation needs to be a powerpoint and FINISHED!!
Sarah- good, get the evaluation done. Was that your mem stick on my comp? Pink!
Charlie- excellent, but the eval questions need to bea powerpoint
Hannah- spoke to you about more research and risk assessment etc.
Charlotte- thin on written points- more research into film openings and genre, also more plannig ideas needed.
Boris- some good work. Evaluation needs posting

Nat- I spoke to you. Great work.

Eddie- the evaluation questions need to be a powerpoint and embedded. I can't open your film!

Ross- I spoke to you!

Overall very good work!

JLD